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Sticks and stones and a loaded gun
I never wanted to be the one
Chemical hairlines rattle the bones
Crying out "God please save our souls!!"

June bug pub crawl shimmy down
Bury me with my broken crown
Cross my heart and hope to find
The needle I pushed into my eye...

I used to believe in heaven and hell
Then I figured either is just as well
Glass blown whirlwind in your mind
You'll know you're immortal when you don't die...

Stop me if you think I'm wrong
Stop me if you think I'm wrong
Stop me if you think-

Gift wrap pillbox take me away
Hope you choke on the cellophane
Tear gas eyedrops; bloody whites
Forget my face when you leave tonight.
©2009 ~innerasylum
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This is something I'm trying to get put to music but nobody wants to fuckin work with me. Anyway, please tell me what you think.

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:iconvertigoart:
Wonderful piece.

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:iconinnerasylum:
Thanks. I just hope it'll be fifty times more amazing when it's got music to it.

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:iconvertigoart:
:D

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:iconvertigoart:
This has been featured here [link]

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:iconinnerasylum:
Thanks, I'm flattered

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:iconvertigoart:
My pleasure.

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:iconarsenic-breath-mint:
love it. I imagined my own little melody and sang it out loud to myself in my bedroom. Made my night better.

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'Tis an ill wind that blows no minds.
:iconinnerasylum:
awwww. ALEX I WANT TO CALL YOU RIGHT THE FUCK NOW,.

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FUCK YOU. PLEASE TAKE OFFENSE TO THIS, YOU PIECE OF SHIT.

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